I Love California

I Love California

A Poem by Donna
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The best State ever!

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     California is the place to be,

there is so much to see.

     We have so much sunshine,

you will think your on cloud 9.

     Disneyland is grand,

you will think your in a dreamland.

     You will love the beach,

it's only at arms reach.

        Monterey Bay,

you will want to spend the day.

       You have to see

    San Francisco Pier,

    since you are near,

   and also Chinatown,

    since your around.

Hopefully you won't have

to experience an earthquake,

   it will make you shake!

© 2018 Donna


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Me too dear Donna. I lived in Monterey for three years in 1992-1994. I loved highway one. I visit last year and next year I will return. Big Sur is my dream. I want to write my book near her. A wonderful poem shared my friend.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Donna

4 Years Ago

California is a wonderful place. I was born and raised here, but now it is getting so expensive and .. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Ain't cheap anywhere to live. Here in Michigan. Very costly and you are welcome dear Donna.
Donna

4 Years Ago

I'm looking at Benton, Arkansas. It is closer to my Grandkids. I bet Michigan is beautiful.
I have visited all of those places! As a Californian, I can relate to this a lot haha. There really is no other place like the Golden State (if only you had included our grand capital!) nonetheless. I loved it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Donna

5 Years Ago

Thank you Zayir! I appreciate your review!
I confess, I don't want to live anywhere else but California! Having lived in many of the areas you mention, your poem sounds very familiar to me, but I also wonder how it might seem to others who only know such locations as a vague idea of a place. Either way, your enthusiasm is obvious & contagious, so people might want to find out more about these places you mention! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


...make that "shake, rattle and roll"! I've only experienced two earthquakes since moving here, and they were both very minor. Most people really do love the climate year round, so I guess we're pretty lucky to call it home! A big wave from San Diego, Donna!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Donna

4 Years Ago

I apologize for taking so long to respond to you. I haven't been on to much, but I do appreciate you.. read more
Have you ever been to a World Heritage list site in CA? Ohio does not have any yet!

Iv'e been to Monticello, the only house in the U.S on the list. Quite odd the White House is not!

John

Posted 5 Years Ago


Enjoying your poems
We have spent a lot of holiday time in Calif. and always enjoyed it.
I bought my current little hot rod just out of San Jose so, 'I know my way to San Jose', both there and back.

Posted 5 Years Ago


i am glad that you are proud of your state and i think california is an amazing place to visit one day

Posted 5 Years Ago


Donna

5 Years Ago

Thank you sette, I hope you will get to visit one day too.

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San Jose, CA



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Hi, I am Donna from San Jose California. I enjoy reading and writing. If you do stop by and take the time to read some of my poems/Stories, please leave a review or comment. I would appreciate it, a.. more..

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