California

California

A Poem by Donna

Thank you for the beautiful weather. I couldn't ask for anything better.
Growing up here was the best. I was very blessed, but things change as the years go by.
It hurts to say goodbye.
California has been great, but it's time for a move to a new state.
No matter where I may roam, California will always be my home.

© 2020 Donna


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It's said that the place where you were born and happily raised is what makes you who you are. Obviously California has gifted you a sense of adventure... but.. beautiful enough to beckon you home. What a fine poem... thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


This was a smiling read for me, California born but left age five and never returned until this year to visit. Absolutely one of the most beautiful places I've ever seen. Not the place I would or will call home.
"Oh, they tell me I was born there
But I really don't remember." (3DN)

I have lived in about 13 different states, but there is one place I still think of as home (the place I grew up and one day left.) Thanks for the post- carl

Posted 1 Year Ago


This was nice. It is nice to have a place you call home. I am originally from the east coast and always considered that home, even though I have lived in Texas for quite some time. But a few years ago the last of my family moved to a different state and now I am not sure it is still home. I will probably never go there again. But...I guess I can still call it that. Your poem was fun

Posted 1 Year Ago


Donna

1 Year Ago

Yes, you are right! It will always be your home. Thank you!
Home is where your heart is.

And erotic partner.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Being a Jersey native, living in Cleveland... I can tell you, home, is indeed, always home.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Hi Donna,
California was my home
but I to felt the need to roam
So Spain is where I am
Nice poem..First I think I have read of yours,
Lisa, now in Spain



Posted 1 Year Ago


Donna

1 Year Ago

Hi Lisa, thanks for taking the time to read this. Wow! Spain is a big move from California! I hope y.. read more
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Loving it here..Yes, very big move!!
Donna

1 Year Ago

I'm so happy for you!
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Les
Your piece is such a great exposition of life. As our situation changes, so does our abode, but we never quite lose our sense of where we came from and where we belong. You captured that brilliantly here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A nice tribute, and a good poem. --- I must say that I agree with you, and with Samuel Dickens, so I'm staying. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


I've never been to California but from the way you speak of it it must be a wonderful state. Good luck on your move to a new home. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


That's a nice poem about your love for your home. It's full of feeling!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Donna

2 Years Ago

Thanks Karen, that means so much to me.
KAREN

2 Years Ago

My pleasure!

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San Jose, CA



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