Seasons of haiku

Seasons of haiku

A Poem by Dory
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A first attempt at Haiku, describing the seasons ... would welcome feedback

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The warm red gold light

draws long shadows on the earth

enveloping all


Tendrils of ice

Creeping slowly all around

A blanket of cold


Buds bursting open

Fresh, green, life everywhere

The world is reborn


Growth, warmth and harsh light

Sun in a cloudless blue sky

Lazy, hazy heat

© 2012 Dory


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Author's Note

Dory
First attempt at Haiku. I'm not sure how to punctuate it, any advice?

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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
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Dory
Dory

Hampshire and Nottinghamshire, United Kingdom



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