Perdu à la brume

Perdu à la brume

A Poem by DrSprinkz73
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This is my latest poem Enjoy! Perdu a la brume means: Lost to the mist

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Your movement is the liquid to a languid waterfall
Wandering through the minds
I hope to find yours
But we live in a seperate trance
Say perhaps I pull you slightly closer
Would your body move as freely?
In our world the teardrops of despair don't exist
Our watch holds unending seconds of bliss
Yet to live forever in this moment is treacherous
Your virginal smile tortures mine to a frown
I hold your hand to watch it slowly disappear
I kiss your lips to feel them never more
The bliss I seek
The bliss I cannot have
Lies within the eyes I cannot keep
Belonging to no one
You give yourself to me

Washing over like the rain
I reach out to the mist that always dances away
Floating closer yet never nearer to mine heart

© 2011 DrSprinkz73


Author's Note

DrSprinkz73
I sincerely appreciate constructive/disatrous criticism. I won't go crying to my mother about how many evil heartless ppl there are in the world, cause I am one of them.. I like feedback if anyone does actually read this. Thanks!

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a truly dazzling ghostly atmosphere you create~ I like the construct~ the format~ and the word weaving is absolutely spellbinding~ captivating poetic~haunting ~



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Added on July 8, 2010
Last Updated on January 31, 2011
Tags: waterfall, mist, dancing, sacred bliss

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DrSprinkz73
DrSprinkz73

Chicago, IL



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I am not a simple person. But I do prefer all the simplicities in life. I can't say it's my dream to become a published writer I ust enjoy what I do. I have goals. I tend to lean towards darker wr.. more..

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