The tipping point

The tipping point

A Poem by Dracon4

Why do you irritate me,
Why do you piss me off?
please let me be,
I dont want any more of this agony.

I tried to ignore you,
I tried to stay away,
but you always come back to bite me,
like an agitated stray.


Just leave me alone,
I dont want another look.
I've had enough of this bullshit,
I'm shutting this goddamn book.

© 2011 Dracon4


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HAHA nice work. I was actually entertained. Thanks for making me feel like shutting my book again. The interesting part about this work is that we think in the start its some girl, but in the end we realize its some dumb book which we need to study for our exams. So you kept it real again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Loved it!
Reminds me of something though...

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I like this
Reminds me of someone I know

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love, love, love this!!!!!! It was amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha oooh. At first I was overthinking it guessing you used a book as a metaphor or something then I read the other reviews and you were literally meaning a book! ha love it. It got me. =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


hah i love this :D great write with a nice ending. good job! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


The ending was an excellent twist.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. haha! ... awesome writing ... loved the simplicity and powerful expression ... so did it work? ... :) ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


HAHA nice work. I was actually entertained. Thanks for making me feel like shutting my book again. The interesting part about this work is that we think in the start its some girl, but in the end we realize its some dumb book which we need to study for our exams. So you kept it real again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Dracon4