It never goes away

It never goes away

A Poem by Dracon4

As night turns to day,

and darkness is purged by light,

when i see your face,

everything seems right.

 

I can't fight this feeling any longer,

is it the will I lack?

it just keeps getting stronger,

and harder to hold back.

 

Try as i may,

it never goes away.

hoping you see the signs,

i'll be waiting for that day.

 

© 2011 Dracon4


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Very nice. You can't wait any longer, but you'll be waiting. Yearning versus letting go... such a complicated position.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heartfelt longing. Nicely penned.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sounds like a deep yearning to me. Lovely expression.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you describe the that the darkness is "purged by light" wow what a powerful phrase, this is a beautiful poem well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kes
Ouch. Cute, I love it.
The flow is great; this is beauty disguised in pain. I love it.
Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sentiments of this work have been beautifully described. Its simple, nice and an eminently beautiful flow is to be seen in this work. Great job man. Good luck. Cheers

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love's longings lead limbs to limp.
Nicely flowing write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wistful sentiments, tenderly expressed. This flowed quite well; nice job...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. it is so realistic.loved it!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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oh wow, I love this, gosh seems as though your poems are writing about my situation. lol
I love it
Flows so nice and smooth,

Posted 13 Years Ago


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