The Forbidden Forest

Take my hand, and wade blissfully into the forested seas of ecstasy.

Our clothes cascade upon grass blades,

Your devil beckons; crawl into the woods
Where the beast can ravage
Your veil of ivory purity.
I want to strip you to the bone

In this forest of broken churches;
Draped under the blanket

Of liquid ecstasy, as crimson drips

From our sin-bathed tongues.
Let the scarlet rain paint your curves

With a brush-stroked kiss;

Soak, your innocent speech

In the red wine haze to lose

Yourself in the taste,

Of a serpent’s bliss.

Reviews

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Amazing. Enjoyed the vivid imagery.

[Bruce J]

The poem caught my attention immediately. The way you describe the desire of wanting her in a sinful, and satisfying way kept me reading. This could be a real awesome story as well.

[Érenn]

This was quite the visual treat for my eyes And as Coyote mentioned below superb wordsmithing and flow is sublime. This write in brevity is quite powerful andaffects the readers' senses in more than one ways. This dark yet sensual feeling portrayed in the poem is amazing and I really enjoyed that feeling ^^ Again you showcase your outstanding vocabulary in this one and express a thought which is somewhat common in a very original manner I liked this one a lot ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

Outstanding use of words.
"I want to strip you to the bone
In this forest of broken churches;
Draped under the blanket
Of liquid ecstasy, as crimson drips
From our sin-bathed tongues."
The above lines were my favorite. The words alive and visual. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote