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A Poem by Bridget Mcmaken

If I could draw would things be different
If I could draw a butterfly or a flower
Would people even notice
But I am just a writer
I write poems basted off drawings
The only butterfly is the one I describe,
I guess it never really mattered
Not even to me
because writing is only a lost dream
No I don't think I'll ever write again
Nor would anyone notice
I think this is really the end
I put down my black ink pen
Throw the notebook away
Yes I think today is the day
The last day I may ever write again
I was no good anyways
So dear writers don't be like me
Don't let them crush your dreams
You love doing what your doing so keep going
No matter what anyone else thinks
Your perfect at your dream
So keep writing
because no matter what it's your dream

© 2013 Bridget Mcmaken


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I really like this, but honestly, I do not think you should put down your black ink pen. If you can write this about quitting, imagine the things you could write about sticking to your writing. Very impressive work here. Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bridget Mcmaken

7 Years Ago

thank you very much. your review gave me some hope. Though I understand what you are saying so I did.. read more
Cassiopia Summers

6 Years Ago

I am glad that I have inspired you to keep your black ink pen. :) I am really glad to hear it.
I have to agree with trainwreck this was a very good piece. It actually reflected thoughts that I have had from time to time. But then i think there is nothing else is this world that i want to do so i keep on. Good work

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was actually pretty impressive! You crafted this very well. There are a few scattered grammar errors, but those are no fun for me to nitpick. I'm not sure if this was artistic license or if you are serious about quitting, but I think you should keep writing. Your stuff is fun to read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bridget Mcmaken

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. When I was writing this I made it quick so I did not have time to fix.. read more
trainwreck

7 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing. And yes, it is always worth writing more.

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Books I write Adventurers Dramas Horror I write poems for ever comes to mind. Many of my poems are deep in thought and come from the heart. I been writing since I was 8 and just never stopp.. more..

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