Lair, Liar, Lie is on you

Lair, Liar, Lie is on you

A Poem by Bridget Mcmaken

Liar
Liar
Be a little smarter
Liar
Liar
at first the joke was on me
my eyes no longer deceive me
I thought you was better then the rest
But I guess I was wrong
Liar
Liar
You sure fooled me
I'm a fool believing you the first time
You promised me it wasn't you
You got me once again
Promised me it would never happen again
Liar
Liar
I believed you once
I won't believe you twice
Then you broke another promise
You can tell me "it's not what you think"
I know what I see with my two eyes
No I don't want to fight
We was doing so much better
Liar
Liar
Here we go again
No one to blame this time
Go on and cry
It won't change anything
Don't call me baby
Liar
Liar
This is the end
No words you can say will change my mind
Don't sleep in my bed
Just let me be
This game is over
This time you lose
And you won't ever win again


© 2013 Bridget Mcmaken


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This is so freak'in awesome it needs to be a Taylor Swift song!

Liar
Liar
You sure fooled me
I'm a fool believing you the first time
You promised me it wasn't you
You got me once again
Promised me it would never happen again
Liar
Liar
I believed you once
I won't believe you twice

If we can only be so lucky to not make the same mistake twice.

Peace out.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bridget Mcmaken

7 Years Ago

if it was a Taylor Swift song that would be sooo awesome! Thank you so much for the review.



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This was good. I especially liked the last stanza since I can really relate to that part. Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bridget Mcmaken

6 Years Ago

Thank you!!! I'm glad that you liked it
Haha, I agree with this being a T Swift song, It definitely goes well with her themes! Great work, I love the repetition of Liar Liar. Really stands out.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bridget Mcmaken

6 Years Ago

thank you.
Trust once broken never heals well

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so freak'in awesome it needs to be a Taylor Swift song!

Liar
Liar
You sure fooled me
I'm a fool believing you the first time
You promised me it wasn't you
You got me once again
Promised me it would never happen again
Liar
Liar
I believed you once
I won't believe you twice

If we can only be so lucky to not make the same mistake twice.

Peace out.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bridget Mcmaken

7 Years Ago

if it was a Taylor Swift song that would be sooo awesome! Thank you so much for the review.
This sounds very lyrical. I love the cadence of liar liar through this piece. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bridget Mcmaken

7 Years Ago

thank you very much! =)

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