When I go outside

When I go outside

A Poem by Aly Jones
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Another poem by my friend, Rebecca.

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When I go outside I smell the clean pretty grass.

 

When I go outside I feel the wind in my hair.

 

When I go outside I can smell nature.

 

When I go outside I feel the bright sun light in my face.

 

When I go outside I smell the flowers.

 

When I step out that door I step into nature

© 2011 Aly Jones


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Author's Note

Aly Jones
Another poem by my dearest poet friend, Rebecca.

I have permission to post this by Rebecca.

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wonderful work

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That was really nice! Beautifully written. Your friend Rebecca is awesome!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful poem indeed. It really connects the five senses, making it an intimate experience for the reader.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca has truly captured the beauty of nature in just a few short lines. :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice way to write a poem and nice images to go along with it.

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Very captivating view on nature.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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She keeps going from smell to feel. Very well written, back and forth. I like that and the simple way she describes each but separate. (hope that made sense) Please tell Rebecca I loved it, I'd be very grateful... :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

this was so nice..
well done..and nice feelings :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awe, very nice and aware of the beautiful nature that surround oneself.

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Beautiful imagery love, so lovely! xoxo

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