When I go outside

When I go outside

A Poem by Aly Jones
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Another poem by my friend, Rebecca.

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When I go outside I smell the clean pretty grass.

 

When I go outside I feel the wind in my hair.

 

When I go outside I can smell nature.

 

When I go outside I feel the bright sun light in my face.

 

When I go outside I smell the flowers.

 

When I step out that door I step into nature

© 2011 Aly Jones


Author's Note

Aly Jones
Another poem by my dearest poet friend, Rebecca.

I have permission to post this by Rebecca.

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Nicely written:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem.
Really shows appreciation for the beautiful parts of nature.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem by your friend....

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Simple and delicate. Loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

simple in an innocent and sweet way. tell her to keep it up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love that feeling.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very warming, clean and fresh feelings i get when I read this. Great :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this imagery. Great piece. Keep up the beautiful work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great imagery! Nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well this is very simple. Easily worded. Easy to understand. Girl/Boy you have the hand of a true poet

Posted 7 Years Ago


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