When I go outside

When I go outside

A Poem by Aly Jones
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Another poem by my friend, Rebecca.

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When I go outside I smell the clean pretty grass.

 

When I go outside I feel the wind in my hair.

 

When I go outside I can smell nature.

 

When I go outside I feel the bright sun light in my face.

 

When I go outside I smell the flowers.

 

When I step out that door I step into nature

© 2011 Aly Jones


Author's Note

Aly Jones
Another poem by my dearest poet friend, Rebecca.

I have permission to post this by Rebecca.

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Tell Rebecca that I found this to be very cute. Simple and to the point. And just... adorably sweet. ^^

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This was very well written. I could actually smell and see what she wrote inside my head. Well done! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 8 Years Ago


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i really enjoyed this poem...please tell your friend!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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So sweeet! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Ohhh tell ur friend I love this :D

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