The Demon's Carnage

The Demon's Carnage

A Poem by Graveyardfuck

Shh...
I'm screaming in my head and I need reticence.
Can you hear the ringing?
I can't.
I can't hear it anymore.
Have I lost it?
Of course not!
I've hit the wall, 
Now where's the floor to take my fall?
Oh, how my head is reeling...
SHH!
I can hear Him.
The Demon...
Sweet Demon...
Who stole my heart and crushed it.
I'm not mad.
I'm dead.
A souless shell of a person.
Little girl down the street...
I see you.
And your fate.
The Demon told me.
YOU WILL LOSE HIM!
The Demon is always right.
You can't run away.
He will dominate.
And two will become one.
These are not my fingers moving.
The Demon found the gun.
These are not my feet scrambling across the slick tile.
Demon!
Demon, stop!
The Demon departs...
Blood, blood, blood.
Is this my blood?
Or the Demons?
NO...
It's the girl's blood.
These are not my eyes I peer out of.
More blood.
Not mine?
Not His?
No...
I scream.
But is the sound I hear piercing my skull from my lips?
Yes.
These are my quivering fingers.
But these dozens of bodies...
They are not ones that I have seized.
NO...
The Demon...
He did this.
But this is my quivering hand, still holding the weapon.
Of His abolition...
I clutch the gun to bring it up to my head.
And pull...



This Was My Downfall

© 2013 Graveyardfuck


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Wow, intense stuff, grips the mind.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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By far one of my favorites.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Great read. I think what I liked most about this was the pacing and the staggered writing. It really drew me into your characters mindset as you took us on a ride through her thoughts. (I'm assuming female, because of the image)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Excellent. Absolutely marvelous. I do not have words for how much I love this piece. Incredibly amazing, this is definitely one of my favorites.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh wow.... that was really good

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you so much!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow! I am left speechless after such a poem! It was an interesting point of view written in a style I'm not entirely familiar with, very well done!

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Tags: demon, evil, psycho, crazy, insane, mad, blood, death, carnage, insanity, morbid, girl, control, massacre, murder

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Graveyardfuck
Graveyardfuck

Fort Walton Beach, FL



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