Paper Wrists

Paper Wrists

A Poem by Graveyardfuck
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A poem I wrote in class.

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It cowers in the corner, shivering.
Her skin is paper white.
And she cannot see, for she has no eyes.
She draws on the walls...with her own blood.
Her bones stick out, she's very small, and frail.
She wants to kill herself...but they won't let her.
They constantly deprive her of food and water.
And when she refuses to eat, they force it down her throat.
She weeps, her cries unbearable to human ears.
She suffers...
She
is
me
... 

© 2013 Graveyardfuck


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You start off describing her as it then you switch to she and her. I think if you continued describing her as an it, that "it" would really add to the mood of the poem. The last three words distract me from the poem. It makes the meaning too apparent I think. Nonetheless, this is very poetic, beautiful yet dark.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Quite different and confusing but if you think it's beautiful then it;s beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chilling yet beautiful. Excellent job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I loved the mood of the poem. Awesome job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You start off describing her as it then you switch to she and her. I think if you continued describing her as an it, that "it" would really add to the mood of the poem. The last three words distract me from the poem. It makes the meaning too apparent I think. Nonetheless, this is very poetic, beautiful yet dark.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A little confused here,
I'm just wondering, is this really a poem of your thoughts or is it just fun?
You don't have to say if you don't want to, it's just I want to know what point of view this poem is at.
~Minnie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

minnie:)

10 Years Ago

Oh! I really do know how you feel. It's like a law, you're not accepted unless you splatter yourself.. read more
Graveyardfuck

10 Years Ago

This is true.
minnie:)

10 Years Ago

It'd be nice if life wasn't like that.
This is beautiful and horrorfying at the same time...It's amazing and just the way I like it. >:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful but disturbing hon. That image doesn't help :/

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the depth and honesty of this is superb but unsettling. well penned!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad yet amazing poem I love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 12, 2013
Last Updated on May 12, 2013
Tags: blood, anorexia, dark, depressing, suffering, starvation

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Graveyardfuck
Graveyardfuck

Fort Walton Beach, FL



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