Float into despair

Float into despair

A Poem by moog-drika

Sell your pessimism,
only if you wish to steal someone's faith. 

Brain, it's a grey human who exhales metaphors. 

Who knows!
Your loyal intent might double cross you. 

© 2019 moog-drika


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Hey Mugda i like that picture! speaking of pictures I like your new picture too:)
To speak in metaphor is to speak in the faith of others comprehension and as such I think it is actually a compliment. Of course it can be also in the form of lack of faith in your own rectitude and as such can be an insult to self. I like how you leave the brush on the painting for others to ponder and complete your lines in this very brief but filled poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


moog-drika

3 Years Ago

Thanking you twice, one for liking my picture, other for the interpretation. Losing faith and having.. read more
Such an intriguing write here, This is so very good.
Loved your last two lines.

Posted 3 Years Ago


moog-drika

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the praise. Lots of love :D
Your poems force readers to think and in a clever way you keep your poems open to interpretations!

Posted 3 Years Ago


moog-drika

3 Years Ago

I love to do that honestly. It helps me understand my poems because I don't get them myself. haha read more
likhon

3 Years Ago

You don't get them yourself?! Whoa! That's some artist right here :p
This is a clever write from a very clever girl.

Posted 3 Years Ago


moog-drika

3 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch for the compliment.
light and ashes

3 Years Ago

:) you're welcome
The mind can indeed play tricks on us, causing self-doubt and double-vision. Those who pull down and undermine are many, caring little about the impact they have on others... and the brain is no less culpable, ranging over moods of brightness to bring clouds of obscurity and damp retreat... The metaphors tumble out, without a car in the world... but making care painful sometimes.

Posted 4 Years Ago


To me, this does not read in a poetic way, but more of a political statement, straightforward & opinionated (in a good way). I am very sick of our current politics that seem to be based on pessimism, fear, & hate. Your poem feels like a spoof on those who feed on ones living in despair. Your perspectives are so "out there" . . . with very original expression and your lessons are heartfelt (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

4 Years Ago

Being a low-key observer, I although try to show what I feel about a certain matter but then again .. read more
Thought provoking like all of your writing. Thinking makes me uncomfortable as I embrace the obvious

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for exploring all the writes. Hope you enjoyed the imagery as it makes you uncomfo.. read more
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Rye
Great write, full of knowledge, very intriguing as well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for all the positive words. Made my day! :'D
Great knowledge and wisdom held within this tight little number.

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Just like how you gave me a great pleasure through this tight yet gratifying review! It extremely me.. read more
My loyal intents always double cross me, but I don't mind.

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Maybe that's life. :'D
sinNsincerity

5 Years Ago

'Tis indeed. But we continue to grow despite the sun setting.
moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Metaphors do make sense sometimes. :'D

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Added on January 4, 2019
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Hey this is Mugdha, a thought poker, a life giver of words. I'm mostly into dark poetry and have a great appetite for reviving inanimate souls. I think they love me for this gesture but that's my pa.. more..

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