Euthanasia

Euthanasia

A Poem by moog-drika

The afternoon was too late

to come and stab my back.

Let me lower the flare of echo,

so that my eyes can stroll around the town,

that was lying under the unquiet tomb.

© 2019 moog-drika


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What an intriguing and creepy write! Love it!


Posted 3 Years Ago


moog-drika

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for taking a ride to the write. Means a lot.
Wow, like thoughts after death or in the midst of it. I like your metaphors here. You're a unique writer for sure.

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Ahh I don't think myself a unique writer. I would rather call my reader's imagination unique. Becaus.. read more
Relic

5 Years Ago

Never thought of that. Nicely said. :)
moog-drika

5 Years Ago

My pleasure ^_^
Kind of deliciously dark, if you see what I mean. What a stunning phrase - 'lower the flare of echo'...! It made me stop in my tracks - and then I was looking with you 'under the unquiet tomb'. If I'm honest, I can't quite fathom what's going on, but the words have a charm quality to them, stirring my imagination which refused to come up with a coherent picture... just a sense of gloom - the stab' but of vitality - the flare... strolling eyes... the voyeur/observer...the town itself buried under death's domain.
Maybe it was a thought, the 'consummation devoutly to be wished', which somehow became parked, left for another time, another place. Something is flaring within me... fearful of the unquiet tomb

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Even if you can't fathom, you still have injected a different meaning into the piece. Honestly, I re.. read more
Jibey

5 Years Ago

I didn't mean to make you speechless! In fact I'm hoping you'll go on writing and stimulating my im.. read more
moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Haha I'll do my best to keep stirring your mind :3
Simply hitting the next level friend, Bravo!! Keep sharing :)💜

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweetie, Lots of love
A powerful word. Artwork and words made your point. Once I saw men in pieces. Could not be saved. Sometime Euthanasia of a sort. Kindness. Thank you my friend for sharing the powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

That still gave a disturbing vibe to my mind.
But thank you so much for expressing your thou.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

It should. What men do to each other is very sad. You are welcome moog-drika.
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The one who cherishes it, does get it but hardly! Not different at death's case....
Wondering how it'd be to feel a merciful ending....going...gone...reached! ;)
But they're quite brave who kiss death's lips while staying in a trauma yet with no hesitation.....where there's me, will take time till the eleventh hour to think, shall I or not!😅.....jokes totally apart, tis a wonderful piece by you dear Moogdha....ineed I had a great read....be blessed :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

I guess nothing could be more painful than kissing death's lips. Obviously this statement has been m.. read more
As I've already told you, your imagination is on the throne level.
Someday I'd really like to meet you. If you sponsor my trip 😂

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

hahahaha I don't think you would need that much money to get here. ;) Some hours maybe? by plane or .. read more
Amada

5 Years Ago

Ohh thanks too. 😊 😊 😊
Who can guess what thoughts are trapped in an irreversible coma? An intriguing metaphorical poetic statement to stir the reader's imagination- great write ... :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Ahh! Stirring reader's imagination! That's one of my favorite jobs! And the question did trigger my .. read more
Like this, a poem that seems to float, leave a lot of doors open,the title sets the tone for a troubled mood.

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

That's the reason why I deliberately left all the doors open. Thanks so much for such a beautiful re.. read more
life has a lot of wonderful and good things for you,but you must stay to feel them

Posted 5 Years Ago


moog-drika

5 Years Ago

Death never understands this, rather pushes me closer to it. *Sigh*

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Added on February 7, 2019
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Hey this is Mugdha, a thought poker, a life giver of words. I'm mostly into dark poetry and have a great appetite for reviving inanimate souls. I think they love me for this gesture but that's my pa.. more..

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