Confetti Heart

Confetti Heart

A Poem by Dressed in Poetry

My heart (always heavy)

Fell like confetti

From the sky –

Cut by a machete

That shone high

As it flew

From you

To my chest,

Hitting true,

Laying me to rest.

© 2009 Dressed in Poetry


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Author's Note

Dressed in Poetry
I really just wanted to rhyme confetti and machete.

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Your really good! ^-^

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love and life can turn the strongest heart to confetti.
Nice use of words and imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awesome rhyme scheme. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"My heart (always heavy)
Fell like confetti
From the sky –
Cut by a machete'
~~i like this line and the hearts
description 'like confetti'~~
this poem speaks on so many levels...
(just beautiful)

:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the contrasts you create with confetti and machete. Confetti symbolizing a party or good time but cut by a machete-- like a very bad party. Stark imagery-- I like the brevity here as well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i enjoyed this, especially the rhyme sceme. kinda short but gives a good point with a touch of imagery. well done!

-Will

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on May 25, 2009

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