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I can save him.  Yes I can!

I can save him. Yes I can!

A Poem by DrewBerry

A little tongue and cheeky about my dating woes!


he has a criminal record and unable to drive, but that's okay 'cuz he hasn't a ride. 

has seven kids he can't even see. a really great dad, which is appealing to me. 

he is separated, but not yet divorced. I do give him credit for staying the course. 

has been out of rehab for nearly a week. preserverance is something I definitely seek.

he chain smokes and drinks & has no money. but that's okay cuz usually he's funny. 

he's broken & lonely and needy of soul. is gender confused and wears women's clothes.

never finished school & has a job that he hates.  said that he loved me on our first date.

is not strong of soul but still a strong sell. is depressed, suicidal and needs to be held.

but he has a great body, something I crave.  Yes, lot's of baggage, but well worth the save

© 2008 DrewBerry

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HA HA Aspiring Angel.. the guy actually DUMPED ME...

Thank God.

I'm now in the midst of a wonderful new love with my PERFECTLY FLAWED man...

mmmmm. indeed.

And umm.. I'm right there in the rest of you co dependant souls too. Why do you think I write.
God help us all.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Well hello there sweetie, I hope you had not given up on me stopping in to say Hi and read another great write, tounge in cheek or not. LOL It sounds as if you might have your hands full with this one but ya know what they say about the love of a good woman. If he feels in your heart that he can be saved then go for it. You will know if there is hope or not after the relationship begins to bloom. Regardless this mystery man of your life has brought us another great title and a great read.


Posted 12 Years Ago

Everybody needs a friend, and yes we all make mistakes. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 18, 2008
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Nashville, TN

I am younger than my years. a Southerner. Christian. adventurous. a little crazy. funny. a cynical idealist. romantic. love everyone. am an advid photographer. a wanna be writer. music lover. hard wor.. more..


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