Magic Once More

Magic Once More

A Poem by David Scott

Blue moonlight is rare.

I remember a cobalt moon,
when tidal passions bathed,
azure souls reflecting euphoric rapture.

Captured in every day luminescence,
I am magical and perfectly white,
spellbound in the golden orb of night.

Contently striding weather worn trails,
following unrest to my reflecting pool,
needing conformation I am simply a man.

At my invitation, she is graciously present,
accepting the blossom of the purple lotus,
embracing me in pleasures of the goddess.

In her eyes I see she knows the man,
singing gently to me, enchanted whispers,
sustaining me until the sapphire moon gleams once more.













© 2014 David Scott


Author's Note

 David Scott
I used different words for the various chroma of blue. Much like love has many subtle variations.
The purple lotus represent spiritual or magical understanding. Color maters...

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Hi David :) This is so vivid and dreamy. "I am magical and perfectly white"...wow! Gorgeous poetry, sir. I'm keeping this one :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


 David Scott

5 Years Ago

Oh... how sweet. Thank you. Looks a bit like your blue water waterfall.
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5 Years Ago

Lynn means waterfall. Why I choose it. It's my name :)
 David Scott

5 Years Ago

I wrote a poem to my favorite waterfall... I'll send it to you.
Aloha,

There is a certain tenderness to your writing that is most refreshing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us out here.

Alisa ;-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


 David Scott

5 Years Ago

You are kind to read and review. Thank you for your comments.
Aloha.
Alisa Js

5 Years Ago

Likewise.

Wishing you well.

Alisa💫
blue is my favorite color and love the different ways you included in this write.. you kinda did have me "spellbound" with this write.. I think it was a breathtaking mix of imagery and the flow of this beautiful piece.. then you sneak in a subtle vulnerability and it tugs on those already vibrating heart strings.. sometimes that confirmation is needed in us all.. we all need that god/goddess to show us the pleasures of life and help us answer that which we question in ourselves.. nicely done David.. you are such a talented writer..

Posted 6 Years Ago


 David Scott

6 Years Ago

Your comments bring light to my heart. Thank you.
This is truly amazing, and possibly, my favourite of yours I have read. Sorry, just don't have a critique. You captured beautifully the colour and the feel.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 David Scott

6 Years Ago

Thank you KL. Sometimes a poem is just a kibble treat. ;)
' .. I am magical and perfectly white .. '

What a wonderful use of words and colour, shades and tones in harmony throughout. You have that special ability to create thought-threads in this reviewer's mind, And for some reason, I now want to dash out into my dusk-wet garden to see if there's a message framed in blue waiting for me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 David Scott

6 Years Ago

Thank you Emma. I have been out of commission lately w spinal surgery. Medicated around the clock..... read more
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

So very sorry to read about your spinal surgery - that's a delicate op whatever the problem; truly h.. read more
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WE
wow , I felt like I was looking through a kaleidoscope of a soul reading this amazing write. Such imagery you have drawn here thank you I truly enjoyed this read

Posted 7 Years Ago


 David Scott

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading WE. I may have been a little dramatic here, but every now an again, I feel dr.. read more
Interesting David very interesting :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

Ha should I have said "boring david very boring " .It really was not it was very sensual :)
 David Scott

7 Years Ago

Oh, I like to tickle back a little. Sincerity in my gratitude dear friend. :)
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

Haha I know I was just pulling your leg.You are welcome :)
I'm not speaking :-) my eyebrows are involuntarily twitching up and down and I feel a cracking grin forming...
I think this means something

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cryingkate

5 Years Ago

Still as mesmerizing as it was a year ago.:-)
 David Scott

5 Years Ago

Ha. Thank you for the revisited read and review. I should edit this a bit. Too freaking busy. :/
Cryingkate

5 Years Ago

I hear ya.....But I don't see the need.
This was painted like a dreamscape... seeing yourself in white, and yet wondering if that is true at all. Sometimes, it is only through the eyes of others, that we see ourselves anew... we may discover, we are not white at all, but blue and purple hues... anyway, quite a romantic & lovely write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 David Scott

7 Years Ago

Thank you Horizon! Yeah! Good to see your words on my page again...
"Dreamscape" indeed.

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