Lost

Lost

A Poem by De'Andre
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At the time I wrote this, I was in one hell of a bind and couldn't decide which way to go

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Enshrouded in misery, engulfed in flames

The faces of hell, I know all there names

A river of fire with a smooth-like flow

Tell me somebody, which way do I go?

 

An ocean of pillows I wish I could reach

I feel like these those pillows have something to teach

A lesson to learn on someone to know

Tell me somebody, which way do I go?

 

A place so peaceful, so quiet, so clean

A place so beautiful, what does it mean?

It's a place of no anger or suffering, so

Tell me somebody, which way do I go?

 

Streets are so horrible, so ugly and bad

To see all the bloodshed makes me so mad

You must be careful, you can die in one blow

Please just tell me, which way do I go?

 

Paths up, down, left, and right

All described from darkness to light

All of these places we've seen and we know

I'm tired of asking but which way do I go?

 

© 2010 De'Andre


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Would be cool to be able to know the safest path and best decisions. I could feel the desire to know where to go and what must be done. I like the ending. Many of us get tire and want proper direction. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gee, I love all your poetry!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hehe... nice choice of picture De'Andre... The poem itself flows amazing, as always... Seizures of happiness to all who read your work (If the colors don't have anything to do with it, lol).

Posted 13 Years Ago


another winner! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Ivy
I really liked it! The rhyme and rhythm were great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! Such flow and amazing rhyme scheme. Like the colors you used as well. The feelings are well presented.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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De'Andre
De'Andre

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