Words from the Pot, and Actions from the Drunk.

Smoke filled lungs
And alcoholic veins
The night was loud,
And filled with laughter.
And more smoke and alcohol.

From laughter and dancing,
To fists and screaming.
Lines have finally been crossed.
The guy with scratches,
And girl with heart ache,
Both lovers to one another,
And yet speak from pot, and
Fight from alcohol.

More smoke filled lungs,
And alcoholic veins to come.
More loud night,
That will be filled with laughter.
And much more smoke and alcohol.

And..
More words from the Pot, and
Actions from the Drunk.

Author's Note

This is actually based on a current event I have witnessed personally, and I have twisted it into my own work of art.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Love the title and the content of your poetry was great...

[Mak(ayla:)]

Thank you(:

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The poem could be about how alcohol could influence spirits that persons didn't know were hidding inside persons.

[Scott Metro]

Tense...stirring..yet alive.
Well done Miss Mak(:

Scotty

[Ahena MK]

really really really good !!! wonderful read !

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I agree with Vidya Bacchus. Outstanding write!

Kaze~ ^_^

[Vidya Bacchus]

Alcohol and drugs can turn any situation badly in the blink of an eye.Well penned :)