F**k You

This isn't anything special,
oh no, but just a rant.
I'm so tired of fake people,
of all the bullshit they create!
Can't you see, that I have better things,
than to worry about YOUR selfish needs?!

I was there for you,
in the time of need,
and now it's my turn.
Oh no, but wait,
where are you, dear friend?
Gone for your own pleasure.

You tell me to just get over it,
and you won't even let me rant?
How dare you?
Do you even care?
Well, listen now, and listen good,
because this is the last you'll get from me.
Goodbye, my friend.
Don't ever come back.
I won't miss you when you're gone.

So this time,
when you need me,
I'll just simply stare,
and won't give damn,
and let you just enjoy the hurt.
And as I walk away,
I'll hold up one finger, and scream,
"F**K YOU!"

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

So many people like that, they use you.
They want you when they need you. You listen offer suport.
Then you need them and they couldn't care a less.
Lots of people can relate to this piece, even myself.
Though you did the smart thing, you fucked this person off.
People like this arn't worth your time.
Not worth keeping around.
Great write, good on you for telling this person where to go, hope you told them this to there face.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I know a few people like that at my school, that are like that. It's so annoying when you give those people anything and try to help them in anyway means possible. But when your on the other end of the coin they don't give a s**t. Then they try to make life miserable for you. F**k the haters, you don't need those people in your life. Down the track they are gonna have no friends in the long run, because people are gonna see them for what they really are. People like that don't deserve loyal friends.

Love the write.

[Luissanto]

So much animosity, exasperation and fury... You can feel it in every line
that was written. Your indignation and outrage for such betrayal is well
expressed. This piece is both raw and sincere... I love it.

[Blogger]

Wow. Strong emotion and powerful feeling. I cant help but wonder if you will do that on the outside...but on the inside you might be really fighting with that reaction? Just a thought.

[Scott Metro]

Some well placed venom Mak......
Enjoyed your rant.

Scott

[Mak(ayla:)]

Thank you. There you go with those dots again.

Makayla

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott...

[Lyan]

One of the worst things is when you are going through something major and your friends will not even make time to talk to you. that's just effed up! Totally messed up and unfair. It is an eye opener. Who wants friends like that. Your poem greatly speaks to just that. I can sense your frustration. I really love the last lines:
I'll hold up one finger, and scream,
"F**K YOU!"
Why keep people who will not help in time of crisis, that you deem to be your friends.
*Kudos on the poem*

[Mak(ayla:)]

Thank you(: Yeah, I know, and it just really was making me upset. So I called them out on it too, and they weren't so happy, but I don't care. It's what they deserve.

[Lyan]

I've been changing and growing as a person. Where I'm not too shy anymore to say something bothers me to someone that's close to me. I've come to see that I rather have 5 loyal and trustworthy friends versus a bunch of "friends." It's great that you called them out on it, good for you!

[Mak(ayla:)]

Thanks, and I love change. And I totally agree

[Edward Lancheister]

wow such a lost, rejection and anger. but in the end of the poem give me a reason to smile, the ultimate expression of your anger.

I'll hold up one finger, and scream,
"F**K YOU!"

you always bring a honest expression and i Like it !

[Mak(ayla:)]

Awe(: why thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

-Mak