Living In Your Name

Living In Your Name

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written during 9th grade.

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Do you feel it,
the burning that I feel?


It reads "lie"


for all the dishonesty
and lack of trust.


Exhilarating,


but not nearly as much
as what you gave me.


It will never replace
the burning;


the burning of your eyes.


Nor the ghost of them.
It's haunting.


Lie,
embedded in my mind.


Don't you dare forget
the words I never said,


never leaving the tip of my tongue,


but you knew.


And even when I lie,
you're just left to wonder,


because you know it isn't the truth.


I can't lie to you anymore,


nor explain, 


nor tell you the words

on the tip of my tongue.


And even if I was gone,
you'd still think I was here.


But did you know that I live in your name?

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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lyrical
vivid
very imaginary

"Don't you dare forget
The words I never said,
Never leaving the tip of my tounge.
But you knew."

simply brilliant

"And even when I lie,
You're just left to wonder,
Because you know it isn't the truth."

again very very nice.

keep on writing and expressing yourself.

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