Gold

Gold

A Poem by Breezie Kae

I never would have said a year ago

that my life’s looking pretty beautiful;

the rain is crystal and the sun is gold,

and I feel like leaving home.

 

I want to play a song for you,

I want to play the best there is.

You got to start somewhere and the starting’s good,

and I feel like leaving home.

 

Leaving home, cause skyward’s where you’ll stay.

Leaving home, but never feeling quite so far away.

I got to say something while I’m still here thinking,

maybe this isn’t home.

 

The thing I would have said so long ago,

that I live for something big and I’m a miracle;

I guess what they said might just be shown,

and I might just get to leaving home.

 

I want to write some words for you,

I want to write the best there is.

They say I got the way and the way is good,

and I might just get to leaving home.

 

Leaving home, cause skyward’s where you’ll stay.

Leaving home, but never feeling quite so far away.

I got to say something while I’m still here thinking,

maybe this isn’t home.

 

Maybe, just maybe,

this isn’t where I’m supposed to go.

Maybe, just maybe,

I belong on the road,

that glitters cause it’s gold.

 

And I can see it now,

I can see it shining,

everything, it shines.

The music hangs and glistens,

and tells me that it’s fine.

 

Oh maybe, just maybe,

I belong on the road,

that glitters cause it’s gold.

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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Great winning poem. Congrats!

Posted 11 Years Ago


"Oh maybe, just maybe,
I belong on the road,
that glitters cause it’s gold."

Hope that what you need, what you're looking for is out there, you just have to faith and claim it. Wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Really a Great poem! Loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is an amazing wonderful write here. This has a wonderful flow

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice poem :) I love the repetition in your poems it adds something to them but I don't really know exactly what... This seems like it could be a song. Alot of your poems would make great songs like maybe played with just an acoustic guitar or piano I'm not sure.... love it though :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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