Three, Two, One

Don't tell me that it's over, because I'm not done.

I'm changing my world in the spirit of

three, two, one.

I'm shooting down the moon when it blocks out the sun.

Don't tell me that I'm losing before I've begun.

I won't know what my odds are until I am done,

so don't shoot down my sun.

Reviews

[Katelyn]

An inspiring and wonderful poem. I agree with Coyote, the ending was outstanding. Great message... thank you for sharing!

[*Private Person*]

like this write, it's truthful

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the positive feel of this poem. No-one should try to knock down the dreams of another person. So much is possible when the heart and mind is focus on something important. I like the complete poem. The ending was outstanding. Thank you.
Coyote