Untouchable

Untouchable

A Poem by Cheavel DeLuna
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short and simple

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Near, but never close.

Scared, of me?

Please, let me in.

Don’t, let me down.

Because I cant handle, even one more fall.

© 2010 Cheavel DeLuna


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Nothing to add but EXCELLENT
regardless its shortness, this poem's so heartfelt and heart-warming ^^
_another great poem from you :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hoping for someone to reach out and grab your hand in hopes for them to save you when you can't do it yourself. Very deep despite the simplicity

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a very curious collection of words... Im not sure that I understand its meaning but the way its written it certainly makes me want to..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah yes. Who among us thinks that he or she can endure one more fall. I like the pleading, trusting tone. Well presented.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 7, 2010
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Tags: short, simple, untouched, leave, fall, cant, let

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Cheavel DeLuna
Cheavel DeLuna

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