Journal Of a Lost Soul

I am bad at grammar and spelling, I do not have an editor yet. I understand there are some errors, but What I am looking for is the story their, dose it entertain you, and make you think. Or is it boring and something you have seen over and over again are starting to get fed up with. Thank you for any feedback you can give me. Their is no such as thing as bad feedback when you are helping me fine tune my writing. If you like it, why do you, if you do not, why don't you.