Alluring Sweet Nothings

Written: March 28, 2015

Hey, I'm not very good at talking to girls out of the blue.

But let me start by saying it's such a pleasure to meet you. 

Relax because the only thing I want do is talk for a bit. 

Get to know me first and I swear you won't ever regret it. 

Please forgive me if I'm bothering you or coming off too strong.  

Just give me a few minutes of your time, I promise I won't take long. 

Perhaps the conversation would flow better if you told me your name.  

Tell me a little bit about yourself and in return I'll do the same. 

I can tell you're interested even-though you may think the feeling is clandestine.  

But the thing about me is I know to treat a women like a princess so pristine. 

It's the impact of your beauty that captivates me the most. 

Making me wonder how much would I give for me to have you close. 

Is there someone in the picture who values and appreciates your elegance? 

Someone who cherishes and respects you every time you're in his presences?

If not then let me say, what a shame it is that you're going unnoticed.  

Because I'd be there to lift your spirits even when you're at your lowest. 

If you were with me, your tears would fade as if you couldn't feel pain.

You'd have nothing to lose because you would have so much to gain.

I'm not like other guys because I'm sure I would treat you right.  

And if anybody else wants to conquer you then I hope they're ready to put up a fight.

In just a matter of seconds, I could completely change your mind.  

And right before you finish a sentence, true happiness is what you could find. 

You wouldn't be considered my possession, but more like a figure of admiration.

When ever people ask, I'd say I hold you in esteem at any moment or situation. 

I want to bestow you with everything your heart is missing. 

And ignite any and all desires you have so we end up kissing. 

It's evident that you're skeptical about my sudden shower of compliments.

But if you fell in love with me, I'd consider that one of my biggest accomplishments. 

I wouldn't stop pursing you even if I had no chance of winning your heart.

I may not know much but I know for a fact romance is a good place to start. 

There are several words I could say to take your breath away.  

There are a million poems I could write to make you smile every day.

If you let me I'd make you the magic of my inspiration.

When it comes to poetry you'd be the only source of motivation. 

I'm not trying to allure you by whispering sweet nothings in your ear. 

I'm trying to offer you a love so secure it would last for more than a year. 

Take my love and I promise, you will never have the need to shed a tear. 

Just tell me you love me and I will tell you that's absolutely everything I need to hear.

Reviews

[Sylvia]

Wow, that's a long poem. It sounds like lyrics for a song, because you have to rhyme song lyrics. It sounds like you're a romantic and very considerate.
I don't write rhyming poems or long poems, that's just my style, but I like it very much. Keep on writing..
Sylvia

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

I get inspired by music, so usually the poems I write do have rhymes and rhythm. And yes I do consider myself a helpless romantic. Yes it is a long poem, maybe I should write shorter poems. Thanks for the kind review. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Sylvia]

No, why should you write shorter poems? Do whatever you want to. It's just easier for me to write lyric poems that don't rhyme. Try whatever you want. Sylvia

[Mari' Emeraude]

I think someone is truly 'smitten!" A marvelous tribute to the apple of your eye.

[Pixidust]

I like reading it in the beginning but, after some of the stanzas I got a little bored, maybe consider revising and making a bit shorter. Or this could make a nice short story if you want to keep it the length it is. Best of luck with your writing, supper good from what I've read!

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

Thank you for the review! Yes I agree there is a lot of unnecessary filler in this poem. If I was to take out a few stanzas I'm sure it wouldn't drastically alter poem. Thanks for the suggestion.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is extremely romantic.
Such a brilliant poem.
Your rhyming was flawless once again.
Comes so naturally doesn't at all feel forced.
this poem shows people a glimpse of the kind of guy u are.
A true romantic gentle men. U definitely have a way with words.
So talented, this has to be one of the best poems i have read in ages.
i hope u find an amazing girl that deserves you.
Never change. And please never ever stop writing.

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

Honeslty you're review made my day! I haven't had anybody to appreciate my poetry at all and knowing that it's one of your favorites means so much! You have no need to worry, because I'll always be writing poetry. I want to thank you for the kind words your kind words but most importantly for thanking the time to read my poem. I'm so happy you liked it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This comment was wonderful to. It makes my day knowing that my review has made someone elses day. It was my pleasure. Your poetry deserves reviews its beautiful.