Sarcastic Oblivion

Sarcastic oblivion is a caustic reptilian

Is a cause for a million trillion billion villains to shed their skin chillingly...

Willingly still

A fed lamb on ah-grill...

Still as dams filled

A still of damnable swill...

A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills

With will of steel...

Tamable fields steal gullible frame from the heels of seals

Healed like veal in halls of fame...

Flames and rain

Eels in pain...

Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel

Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...

Tables round and able to saddle cables

Ladles making halos...

A noble payload

Reviews

[Tom Aubin]

The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!

[Chase Dylan]

You would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and time taken to visit... It means the world

[Tom Aubin]

It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of your writing in the future.

[Chase Dylan]

Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

[Damien Ridge]

Rhyme play is on point for sure. I enjoyed the piece, first writing I've read by you and I'll be looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks a lot, Damien, means a lot coming from such an inspired artist as yourself...

[Relic]

I laughed when reading this because I have no idea what it means.

Tamable fields steal gullible frame from the heels of seals? haha Man, I think I might be giving up poetry soon. lol

You ARE good though. :)

[Chase Dylan]

You and me both, Relic, haha... You and me both... Or is it you and I...? I never know... Was hoping someone would comment on the "heels of seals" line... Rofl... Thank you

[Carol Cashes]

And I laughed reading your review! I, too, struggle. Had to look up "tamable" thought it was a new word - it's tame-able, but he spelled it correctly! I ain't playin' Scrabble wid 'im, thas' for shore!

[Carol Cashes]

Wait, wha..?! "heels of seals" - it's something lofty and esoteric, right?

[Chase Dylan]

Lmao... Carol... Omg I am dying over here... Hahahahahahaha.... I.... Hahahahahahahaha... We ain't com' 'ere 2 dab'le in da' scrabbl'

[Chase Dylan]

And... Uhh... Sure... Absolutely... If that is what you are pulling from it... *Nods head* That sounds groovy to meh

[Carol Cashes]

You jus' can't hep yore self! "2 dab'le in da' scrabb'" You killin' me...

[Mr.Writer]

As usual, all of your pieces are brilliantly penned Silente!
This piece deals with different thoughts and emotions in a productive way and engages the readers at the same time!
Well done, keep it up!

[Chase Dylan]

I appreciate it much, Mr. Writer of Fate...

[Mr.Writer]

Haha, no problem :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh fame and fortune can change many people into things they should not become. I love the repetition of rhymes in this piece.

[Chase Dylan]

Aye, that they can, Poetic... Thank you