Sacred Vapors

I'm untamed

Insane brain lame-reined in to fillet saber-lain drains

In labor I gain ravens braver than slavers able to savor gall-breaker takers

if you're in favor lets rape-her and traverse papers for diverse capers

I'm tapered

a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers

on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors

Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations

Fulmination of generations slated in gray

Painted on a submarine stage

a rage in a cage set like a face-plant

I'm like Abraham and freed the slaves of verbal-trends

I'm global-sent and vorpal-bent

but low-rent keeps me lent to the lamb

I'm slammed and lambasted

ran outta RAM by a ram slipperier than grand

By ghosts boasted most toast by the roastiest roach

I puff a roach 

roast a goat

loads of moats rowed alone

Host is over-grown

sober toned loans and blown-out foam

roam ah-doam and sloped groans

I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts

No tone

Author's Note

Umm... Stuff...

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

You're back in the groove, my friend! My favourite lines in this one are:
"a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers
on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors
Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations
Fulmination of generations slated in gray
Painted on a submarine stage".
Keep 'em coming!

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Horseman, it is much appreciated

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome, Silente.

[Jade]

sober toned loans and blown-out foam
roam ah-doam and sloped groans
I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts
No tone

LOVE this part, This is a really good. Enjoyed this

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks very much, Brandie
I love your love for my loved lines, thanks again

[Stephanie M]

Too cool. This reminds me of the poetry done by Jack Kerouac. Are you familiar with him?

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks so much! Sorry it has taken a minute to reply! Been away for a while. I am not familiar... But I can be with the power of... .GOOGLE! Lol

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Lots of comparism and vuvid imagery. Well crafted.

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, I appreciate that... Comparison is important!

[Katy]

Very well penned! Keep writing

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks, Katy... Stealing my lines of praise...! Hah

[JC]

reminds me of a mix of Kerouac poeticising to jazz and some great hip hop verse, grabs you right from the start.

[Chase Dylan]

NO clue what that "Kerouac" is, but I am now intrigued, hah... Thank you, I def love hip hop

[Jackie]

your wordplay is out of this world dude. i mean, geez i thought i was good, iv never read or heard anything like you create. you must got a mastermind or something. this is real clever and ingenious stuff you got

[Chase Dylan]

Wow, thank you so much, Jackie... Lots of practice and hard work= A "mastermind", heh...

[ROXANE DORSEY]

wow this is wonderful written . thanks for the poem

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, you are welcome

[Lovecraft]

Wow, a real tongue twister, lol. Very descriptive and well-chosen words. A poem mixed in a blender and I mean this as a compliment.

Weirdly good. :)

[Chase Dylan]

Who does not love blenders... Thanks, Lovecraft

[Lovecraft]

No problem. Just recently came back to the Cafe.

[Chase Dylan]

Heh, me as well... I would not really define myself as having returned, however... Just visiting, lol