A moment of us

I wrote this for my wonderful boyfriend of two years.

If under the stars, we sat for a while
I'd tell you my secrets, and steal you a smile
If the world stood still, and the moon stopped shining
I'd walk with you under the false lighting. 

If the trees stayed bare, through all of the seasons
And the sun chose not to glow, for it's own selfish reasons
I'd take your hand, and we'd dance in the dark
And sit at the pond, that grows still in the park. 

Sparks will fly, under the moon lit sky
And we'll use that light
To brighten our path
And together, we reach our abode, at last

In our room, we sit by the fire
And, feel the flames as our hearts will perspire. 
We'll blanket together, in the glimmer of light
And snuggle for warmth, and I kiss you goodnight

Reviews

[Angela Payne]

I love this! It all fits together great, flows, it's heartfelt, and it's wonderful. :)

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you

[Kelsey]

This is absolutely beautiful. It put a smile on my face and a warm fuzzy feeling. It's written so elegantly, and it's so heartfelt and sweet. Wonderful job. (:

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you so

[B-poet]

A very sentimental and heartful poem. Savoring the companionship of who your most fond of has it's own special meaning. Gream poem. Very eloquent as well.
:)

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you kindly

[sierrasparks91]

very beautiful peom i enjoyed the read

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you, the positive feedback is appriciated

[sierrasparks91]

your very welcomed :)

[lee von cleef]

Just a kiss? Kick off your spurs so they don't get caught in the ceiling fan. Take you piggin string and tie him to the bedpost , then grab the quirt and dare him to tell you he doesn't love you.

[Anissa Amer]

Uhhh...

[lee von cleef]

try writing while listening to "John Prine, or Melloncamp" Love is more then a kiss , it is a compliment, which is what I thought I was giving you.

[Anissa Amer]

I understand what love is. I just didn't understand what you were getting at. Anyhow. Thanks for your compliment

[MichaelGrisby]

Nice poem! It flowed smoothly and painted a perfect picture for me.

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem...
I hope the font was a little bigger...

[Anissa Amer]

Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...