A letter to Paul

A letter to Paul

A Story by Anissa Amer
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I honestly don't know what drove me to write this one.

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I'm waiting on a letter.
From my best friend Paul.
It's been a long year
SInce i've seen him at all.

I sent him a letter five days ago
Perhaps, his letter will be long and wise
Though, he may be busy fighting bad guys

I'm starting to wonder if I said something wrong
Because Paul hasn't written in so very long
I miss my old friend, I really do.
I hope that he writes me a letter back soon

Paul, I am worried
So i'm sending a note
It's been a whole week
and not a peep from your soul

I turned on the news
To see who was winning
What I saw was horrific
And very bone chilling

Our men are dying
It's getting real bad...
hopeless children..
they're losing uncles and dads.

Theres a car out front...
I peeped through the window
There are two men with peppered hair.
heads down, walking up the porch stairs.

Before the said a thing...
I started to cry...
Vietnam got you..


It was a matter of time.

© 2012 Anissa Amer


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this is nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Anissa Amer

11 Years Ago

thank you
This is hauntingly beautiful.
Your poetic technique of simple storytelling made the voice of the poem even more powerful and honest. Lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anissa Amer

11 Years Ago

Thank you gor the positive feedback
The end of this gave me chills. Wonderful write. Maybe it's just me, but I didn't expect this to have to do with war, so when I read the ending it really got to me. Great job, thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anissa Amer

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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Added on September 16, 2012
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Anissa Amer
Anissa Amer

Orange, TX



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