The Young ManA Poem by EliI was bored one day in class and had this one idea stuck in my head, and what was created is a kinda philosophical poem that may be hard to understand, so I apologize for that.
Previous Version This is a previous version of The Young Man. The young man awaits For the screeches of the train Lights flicker, an older man states, "There, the time is here" And a cane in hand, money to pay Quickly walks away.
The young man treading Through the narrow halls Across unfamiliar faces, warning From his path. "It is done," They call, shaking their heads. "Again 'tis repeating," they say.
The young man backward he falls Knowing nothing to learn, nor Anything to remember. "Those calls," He says, "They will never help." Aboard the train he returns, His journey, he never learns. © 2013 EliAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on September 14, 2012 Last Updated on March 8, 2013 Previous Versions AuthorEliCharleston, SCAboutI'm a 17 year old kid who loves writing, photography, reading, mathematics, science, and music! *IF you review any of my work, please don't just say how good it was. I want strict reviews that can.. more..Writing
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