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A Poem by Eli
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Don't mind me tonight

I walk along the shadows

Step, step, clouds down low

Don't mind me tonight

Don't come along with me

I speak my wisdom, not question

Breathe, breathe, my eyes averted

Don't come with me

 

Offer me more, offer me plenty

I move on tonight

Through meadows

Under blue skies

I move on tonight

Offer me more, offer me plenty

Where is it I go, tonight?

Clouds down low, I walk,

I speak down low tonight.

 

Where are my books?

I walk miles tonight

I reach around and pull

Offer me more, more

I speak my wisdom

Where are my books?

Where did I go?

© 2013 Eli


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Eli
REVIEWS ARE A NECESSARY PART OF MY DIET. DON'T MAKE ME UNHEALTHY



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hey eli, it's been a while since I've been on here and I came across your poem. It's a beautiful poem, a feeling I can understand myself, kind of like facing reality and it is honestly so scary, but you make that journey and when you do maybe you'll feel more full again. I hope you keep writing, maybe I'll start again too! Loved it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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