LOOK DEEP-----DEEP INTO MY EYES

 

  LOOK -- DEEP-- DEEP INTO MY EYES

 

Share with me, your soul

Share

Bare your soul--- now

Tell me your great wish

 

This no one can ever repeat

You will not tell your best

Look deep and say

What do you want today ?

 

Open

Open up

`Sup ?

 

Funny what you should want

That's what I might say

Go back into a trance

Now ! 

 

----- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Aprille]

I'm interested at the title that's why I read it then I laughed with myself. That "trance" is pretty interesting, well for me the message is pretty clear as soon as I've read the title. ;)

[Tori Hughes]

It seems hypnotic, but I think you might have wanted it that way? Referencing a trance? I like it though. It took me a minute to think about what it means to me, but I figured it out :) Nicely done.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Once more I am impressed. You knew exactly what I was saying.
You nailed it.
Much pleasure seeing your thoghts.... You know the mind
of a man.... more than most women I think.
Thank you---- a lot.
---- Eagle

[Holly Mason]

What if the only wish was a WANT for another?an offering a moment of friendship then the trance will be thrown....nice to see you fine sir

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

It's been ages since I have reviewed your writings but I come back and still enjoy them....very well written

[Missphit]

I picture this in a slow, breathy voice being spoken to me in a supreme tongue. Forcing my thoughts to bare themselves cold, illuminating my skin with beads of sweat although I shiver. Very well written and to my liking.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Ah this give me the creeps and makes my head dizzy for some reason, which just shows how powerful it is. A really enjoyable read this was Mr. Cruagh:-):-):-D.

[JoSephMacGown]

I totally enjoy this- I thought the second to last stanza was pretty awesome...

[YouoweYoupay]

This write reminds me of third eye experiences. Although I've learned that this gift is more common than people think, spiritual visions can be fault at times, or blurred by negativity. Sometimes there are things we better not reveal about other people, like what I understood after reading this poem. Keep writing.

-Rain.

[Meliss@k]

Meant to say *i love the first stanza and last stanza the best*

[Meliss@k]

Like every one of your other poems, simply brilliant from beginning to end. Literally, I lives the first stance and the last stance the best. "Eye" opening.