NOSTALGIA

NOSTALGIA

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh
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Looking inward and behind.

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NOSTALGIA

I tried to write a poem
Because my love she asked me too
She said , "my love, please write for me"
"You say such pretty things
And when we pass from this sweet life
Your thoughts nostalgia brings"

Suddenly her fragrance fills me
Like she is in the room
I close my eyes and flowers bloom
Like photo`s in the air
My sweet fair love reclining now
Like nostalgia , but she is there

Shaking cobwebs from my brain
The mist of coming rain
Morning dew from a lowly branch
Fluttering wings of dove
You live in these and other things
My angel from above

How to make you understand
That life without you would end
You are my sweet eternal love
Our tenderness in all travail
With the certainty of a river`s bend
You rise before me frail

I hope you understand my Sweet
Mere words cannot replace
The warmth we hold so dear
The veils of heaven and the corridors
Of hell will never make this clear
I`m you`re canvas and you`re my lace

---- Eagle Cruagh

© 2008 Eagle Cruagh


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Such a sweet piece. I have felt this way before. Trying desperately to put into words the pure and true emotion of love, and rarely does it come off the way that I intended. I've written for many loves, but I don't think that many of them really understood what I was trying to say. This is a familiar piece to me; dear to my soul. Nicely written.

Second line "too" should be "to"?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a lovely piece.
"I`m you`re canvas and you`re my lace"
This was penned beautifully and I could feel the emotions within your text.
Thank you for sharing.


Posted 13 Years Ago


This is beautiful love and devotion written with words finely penned. Wonderful ending stanza.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Breathtakingly beautiful.
I loved this.
You have a wonderful way with words and your talent shines throughout this piece.
Amazing imagery. Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You pull at the strings of the heart with such beautiful words. Thank you for sharing it with everyone.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm your canvas and you're my lace

I ADORE THAT LINE!
Cheers to you and good luck in the Lolita contest! Laura

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely piece! Full of feeling. Thank you for entering the contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is delightful... full of delight, full of beautiful phrases and words, and, most of all, full of feeling. 'Love that final line.. sums it all up, doesn't it.

Shaking cobwebs from my brain
The mist of coming rain
Morning dew from a lowly branch
Fluttering wings of dove

Those are beautiful lines, soft but really get to the core of emotion.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Eagle Cruagh

7 Years Ago

The world`s greatest writer has honored me (7 years now)
with a beautiful review.
Th.. read more
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

Yes.. i came in disguise, looked just like William Shakespeare! . :)
This is quite stunning...such beautiful words at a moments notice - hard to accomplish I agree but you have managed to pen something quite extraordinary here. May she fill your canvas with the brightest of hues forevermore.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lol it is hard to write about something when put on the spot...you said it well

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

what a beautiful piece, i love how you write a poem about her while talking about writing a poem about her, very creative
nice work
thank you for entering my contest

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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