A FUN LOVING GUY

A FUN LOVING GUY

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh
"

He stole hearts and he was smooth, but something is amiss----

"
FUN LOVING GUY
 
She was only a poor workman`s daughter
Quiet as the morning`s dew
She longed for the rapture she found in words
Sadly she found only you
 
The gigolo posed shirtless and smooth
Aloof the kids called him cool
He wrote all these beautiful words
The words that made poor  Angela  drool
 
Around here they called him a poet
Down at the hardware we called him a fool
He spewed incense in words and joined a group
Of sleek and slimey males by the pool
 
These poets all spoke in a rapture of words
Angela poor innocent girl
Preened and adjusted all that she owned
Unknowingly adoring his curls
 
The day came when out of the blue
She confessed that she needed this jewel
Angela now stolen from out of our world
Angela lured away by this fool
 
When Angela thought him to propose that day
For he was a poet you know
She listened for his voice a soft quiet glow  
Instead she heard them tell her "he`s gay".
---- Eagle Cruagh
 
 
 




 

© 2010 Eagle Cruagh


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Very funny! Nice twist at the end, it made me laugh out loud.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I did not see -that- coming. I liked that this evoked feelings in me for Angela. I feel so bad that this guy led her on. Good job with this. I liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


HAHA. Your poems are really a good way to end my day. And it's really funny how this GASP moment has just happened to me recently. :)) Love the twist. Keep on writing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


lol Ah the cruel twists of fate lol Nice!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

did you make a change? this feels new to me
what a twist of fate
how very true it is that women fall in love with their ears


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

' He spewed incense in words and joined a group / Of sleek and slimey males by the pool ' - picked up on this and so wasn't too surprised by the final line! Oh but this post is sad-funny and the meter's great.. you've created a real tale - in fact, can see a short film lingering among the full stops and commas.

As ever you've written a wonderful post, one to enjoy but, be warned by :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Insightful, creative, and profoundly funny, I love how the poetic story plays out and twists until the very last line. Excellent write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So funny . I had fun reading this. The girl must be hurt though. Well, reality bites.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 11, 2008
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