THE LAST VERSE

THE LAST VERSE

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh
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The future

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THE LAST VERSE
 
They looked deep into each others eyes
Their hearts pledged as one
No longer any doubt
They clung together
Forever !
 
-----Eagle Cruagh

© 2009 Eagle Cruagh


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A happy ed!
How nice ... and how hard to find these days ... I wish there were more of this kind here ... but everyone has to die or cry or finally break up ... Nobody understands the real meaning of love .. the ENDLESS love...
honestly .. I'm crying because of a lack of happy ends in today's poetry =)
Kudos

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The last verse of love, achieving togetherness, the verse that holds the most to it and yet the one that does not hold the most importance at times. I dig this, and no, I didn't choose the shortest one, this is the first I clicked on, but I'm glad I did ;), nah jk. It's a real skill to embody something profound in such a short form. Something that people write books about, and keep writing more and more books about.

But that's real skill right there people you're looking at.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These are the good verses in a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Last verses are always my favourite. This shows why. Well said.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with everyone.
Short, simple, powerful with the added bonus of a Happy Ending! :D
I really like this one.
Props to you for writing this. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short, simple, powerful. Great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A happy ed!
How nice ... and how hard to find these days ... I wish there were more of this kind here ... but everyone has to die or cry or finally break up ... Nobody understands the real meaning of love .. the ENDLESS love...
honestly .. I'm crying because of a lack of happy ends in today's poetry =)
Kudos

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*Sigh*

No words are really needed after reading this.
Stunningly Beautiful

In your fashion: 100%

Love this,
Lynne

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is perfectly written and almost like every romance novel I have read. Very beautiful. Excellent work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


brilliant job my friend, its a capture of the portrait, in hue. intelling the classical word design.
the title speaks volumes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

darling....

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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