THE LAST VERSE

The future

 

THE LAST VERSE

 

They looked deep into each others eyes

Their hearts pledged as one

No longer any doubt

They clung together

Forever !

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[LittleMadGirl]

A happy ed!
How nice ... and how hard to find these days ... I wish there were more of this kind here ... but everyone has to die or cry or finally break up ... Nobody understands the real meaning of love .. the ENDLESS love...
honestly .. I'm crying because of a lack of happy ends in today's poetry =)
Kudos

[lindsay]

This is short, but so beautiful. These words mean so much although so little is written. GReat job.

[Ellen Hammond]

Wow short and sweet but packed with the very essence of love and devotion. A really lovely sentiment and very appropriately titled too.

[emmajoy]

A few well-chosen and beautiful words can make a book.

Lovely thoughts, wonderful poem.

[Simone]

Awesome work. Love it- short and sweet but meaningfull. Love the romance- For some reason I'm reminded of The Maximum Ride series -MaxXFang. Again, awesome.

[Tracie Skarbo]

Nice, this is short, sweet, and is packed with romantic notions. I like it...