SEA BIRDS

SEA BIRDS

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

 SEA-BIRD
 
Clouds of fog
Mist and spray
Deep booming voice
As fog horns pray
 
Dog digging furious
Chasing gooey duck
Digs then down the beach
Poor dog is out of  luck
 
Shrill sea-bird cry
Spattering rain
Drop the main sail
Home again
 
-----  Eagle Cruagh

© 2011 Eagle Cruagh


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I love the flow and the smoothness of this poem. It paints a calm scene of the sea and I love the dog on the beach but I work at a groomers so what can I say. This has a relaxed quality to it that I really enjoyed and the last line sums up this piece well. HOME. There is nothing quite like home.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is nice and simple, but chock full of imagery, like a good storybook or a painting. I see so many colors and shapes. i can smell the ocean and the rain hitting hot sand. it is all there, without you even having to say it. Clever, my eagle friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such great imagery in this piece. I had to re-read this because it is so packed! It is just beautiful. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stunningly straightforward, not a word minced, not a syllable missed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, what a beautiful picture in my mind as I read this. So peaceful and so warm!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the flow and the smoothness of this poem. It paints a calm scene of the sea and I love the dog on the beach but I work at a groomers so what can I say. This has a relaxed quality to it that I really enjoyed and the last line sums up this piece well. HOME. There is nothing quite like home.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was lyrical and full of great images...excellent last verse...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I admire the conciseness of this piece and the heart warming quality it holds. Almost vocal, if that makes sense :) Takes me right to the setting..I can hear/feel and see it it all..beautiful work love xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


this made a nice read! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short, sweet and with more image than most people pen in 10 pages. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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