DADDY`S DAY

 

   DADDY`S DAY

 

First there was a little girl

Made by Fairies in Fairy City

She climbed on Daddy`s lap

Said Daddy you got whiskers

Remember that when you grow up

Men got `em

 

Then came a little boy

Made by Cowboys in Kansas City

Climbed on Daddy`s lap

Said Geeezz  I`m a man and jumped down

Good boy

You`re my little man

 

No inference here about a gender

Just dusting off a father`s love

They got my number from the day

They first came and gave me a shove

Sayin You`re my Dad

Got to admit they hit that button

The one  that makes us Daddy`s  love

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

 

 

Reviews

[Half Dream]

Very sweet! :)

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Heartwarming and precise, the poem speaks eloquently about the joys and wonders of parenthood...until they become teenagers. Enjoyed this very much!

[Muse]

Awe! I love it when a Daddy lets his little girl get wrapped around his finger. And the son...his imagination is his Father's own.

[Julie Dant]

Glad you dusted off your Daddy love and shared this sweet poem with the world. The Fairies and Cowboys making little girls and boys was a great idea. A feel good poem, Eagle. Thanks. ;0)

[Corset]

Delightful, children are such a treasure, troubling at times to be sure, but treasures just the same.

[Quill~]

Very sweet. A great reminder of loving fathers, on Father's day. Thank you.

Charlsei

[J]

wow. no hint of sarcasm at all! just a very sweet, simple declaration of love. nice work, dad. :)

[Stormy Weather]

This was quite cute and lovely. A great poem :)

[MOON]

Good write made me smile.

[Wondering Mind]

Oh that button!! How it controls all of our whole..Very sweet, my friend