Why ?

Why ?


A religious poem...hope you enjoy!


Remember the infant son

peacefully,lying in a manger

some came to see the holy one

others believed he was danger


some so full of fear

anger filled their hearts

A perfect being, near,

played the biggest part


Throughout his devoted life

So lovingly he cared for others

removing blindness,sickness and strife

for all our sisters and brothers


Many ridiculed,cursed and stoned

constantly,they called him liar

should've put him on a throne

to seek truth, and so admire!


why couldn't they plainly see

He was seeking perfection

their life eternal, would be

by following his direction


Now the decision sadly chose

it definately was our loss

cause as everyone surely knows

Jesus was crucified on a cross!








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A spiritual gem that edifies the reader, this is beautiful and touches the heart.
thanks for sharing such a great poem diana.

Posted 13 Years Ago

this is really good. the retelling of the crusifiction of Christ. deep and heart felt. loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

very well done!
Thank you for all the reviews by the way!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Diana-this is beautifully done- and speaks
on many levels.. spirit-emotion-heart..
i love the rhyme form.. beautifully done..
powerful messege.. stunning.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Diane, I love the title of this piece a great deal! Yes, why indeed. Why do people act the way they do? Why do some people not believe or even believe in one another at times. I really liked what you said here. nice job!

Posted 14 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great poem Diana, after all the ridicule and pain, the mockery, the gruesome death on the cross, to think that he went to hell after that to steal the power of death from the Liar, and it was our deaths he secured for eternity. It always blows me away that there are those who refuse to believe in him.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 14, 2008
Last Updated on June 14, 2008

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