I Love You Already! >:O

I Love You Already! >:O

A Poem by EDRC
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positively NOT the best poem in the world. the rhyme pattern is stereotypical and the phrasing is crud but it needed to be out there.

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Though I've been leavin' fingerprints
you just don't seem to catch the hints
While you just can't seem to get a clue
I've been fallin' in love with you

In this poem, as you should see,
I've been as blunt as I could be.
I don't expect a yey or nay.
not expectin' answers anyway.

Just wanted to get that off my chest
It's not a joke, my heart don't jest.
However cheezy this is to hear
Just keep in mind the words sincere

Whether you need friend or lover
I will be your bread and butter
Just a tad bit country to put it as such
but when you come from Texas, you can't help that much

So I'll grill up some steak and a table for two
some candles or maybe an old ocean view
Southern Lovin' is somethin' you can't escape hon.
I ain't lyin', my apple, we'd be pretty fun.

but if a friend's all you want and a pal's all you need
then i'm there for ya buddy. I ain't gonna plead.
Since i'm a little old fashioned so if you asked then why not
but if you're waitin' for me it'l take longer than thought.

© 2011 EDRC


Author's Note

EDRC
i don't expect anyone to like this. I don't expect compliments. I know this one sucks. Just know that the message for you in this one is as blunt as its gonna be. You don't have to comment about it, i don't expect you to. I just wanted to get it out there for you to decide. If no, just delete this and we'll pretend it never happened, that it never exsisted. If you happen to have a little question for me cuz im not about to ask, then we can look back at this and laugh. nothing changes if things go wrong. if we try and it does end up a flop, then we go on as if it never happened. you know me, im in for the long term. if you feel up to it, you know where i'll be. ~Erica~

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I didn't realize you felt this way, Erica. -- Ryan.

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow. to just put your heart out there like that? ...your one brave person. good luck to you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by EDRC