Turn to you

Turn to you

A Poem by EJB
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This is for the people who are in pain, we understand.

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You've had a tough life, a rough start
you got the punishments of so many others
you were broken down, wishing for your dreams to come true
but you still are my inspiration

I was there when you needed a shoulder to lean on,
there to learn so many lessons
there to witness your dark side, your hidden secrets
but you still are my inspiration

i know you don't always trust me, but i'll always trust you
you like to be different apart from everyone else
your feelings show, but only to the ones you love
but you still are my inspiration

You may think your the bad guy, you don't know that your good
you may feel apart, but we are both the same
you don't think i understand you, but i always have
but i still admire you
and will always turn to you

© 2012 EJB


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I like this poem, it's nice. :) It just makes me smile, in a way, I don't know why, but it just does. Make me smile, I mean.

Just wanted to point out some mistakes. Errrrrrmmmm.... Right, the 'your' should be 'you're'. Some parts feel rather awkward if you say it out loud, maybe you could go over it and perhaps drop some unnecessary words or switch some of the words around, mix it up. XD

Love the poem otherwise, it was perfect. xP :P It was good. Just go over it and read it out loud and adjust it, I think it'll be a phenomenal piece of work. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Nice work! It has a soft and nice feel to it and it does make you smile like Azah Lee said. Has a thoughtful feel to it.I love it
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like this poem, beautifully written with a lovely meaning. It made me really happy for some reason so thank you! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You are soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice and funny and smart and kind and caring and yeah :) Thank you again

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwweh. Kewl Poem EJB :) Thumbs Up 2 Ya!! Love From Your Biffle, ChocolateLovaa xoxoxoxo

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this poem, it's nice. :) It just makes me smile, in a way, I don't know why, but it just does. Make me smile, I mean.

Just wanted to point out some mistakes. Errrrrrmmmm.... Right, the 'your' should be 'you're'. Some parts feel rather awkward if you say it out loud, maybe you could go over it and perhaps drop some unnecessary words or switch some of the words around, mix it up. XD

Love the poem otherwise, it was perfect. xP :P It was good. Just go over it and read it out loud and adjust it, I think it'll be a phenomenal piece of work. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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made a mess up with plurals, whoops :) will fix now

Posted 8 Years Ago



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