What You Don't Know

you don't always know how I really feel

Good for you for getting better

But what you don't see

Is that you broke me

Your mind is free

Of unhappy thoughts

Now filled with joy

But me

My happiness was turned off

And tied into knots 

As you run off

Happy and free

What you leave behind 

Is me

In a state of mind

So unkind 

But good for you for getting better

I'll just be over here

Fighting off my tears

Author's Note

constructive criticism is welcome

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I can totally relate to this
I’ve lost friends

People in my life over the years

They leave you with a gaping hole in your heart whilst they are happy in their new surroundings

I enjoyed

[mattavelli]

Hello, Emily! :)
This is a sad story. What sort of constructive criticism do you welcome?