D E S P E R A T E

D e s p e r a t e.

Craving a little love in life,

wrapping a rope around your neck,

closing your eyes to block out the sight,

insisting that your life is a wreck,

needing someone to be there for you,

sitting in the corner alone,

contemplating on what to do,

the answer and all to you is unknown,

laughing out loud with a silent cry,

your heart lays heavy on your chest,

broken from how much you try,

let it all end, now you can rest.

Desperate.

Reviews

[GgTellsYou - Keep Smili..]

This was an interesting poem. Though you commented that you don't actually feel this, you caught the pain and overwhelming emotions that comes with thoughts like that. Wonderful poem.

[Honey-Bee]

I like this poem and I think it expresses a life in need of love and caring. I hope it is not a real cry for help and that you are ok. I like the way you did the different kind of writing and how you started and ended it with desperate. cleaver.

[ENJOY A CUP OF COFFEE]

Thank you. And yes I am fine,do not worry. I never really wrote a poem like this, and I thought it was different so I did. Haha But thanks! :)