In Between Infinities

In Between Infinities

A Poem by Elephants & Coyotes

I once saw the edge of time flip over,
Into the middle of two days ago.

So, I sat right through it,
Because, I already knew it -

Realized opportunities,
Lost in the cosmos. 

--

Just now,

I saw the beginning, 
Of time flip over,
Into our section of the universe,

How many years,
Do you think disappeared,
Or doubled,

In this single discourse?


© 2011 Elephants & Coyotes


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Elephants & Coyotes,

During first read, you discover it is a theory way over your head. Upon reading a second time, you uncover some truth within the penning.

I saw the edge of time flip over into the middle of two days ago, WOW! Something I never expected to read anywhere, at anytime; in any circumstance (much less did I give thought thereof).

You just know there is an opposite of everything and time flipping back was a brilliant thing, for what would we do if the edge of time stayed in two days ago?

Awesome thought to ponder upon and even more real than imagined, sweet conspiracy theory.

Bravo Bravo~

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

I would like to invite you to place this one into Poetic Infusion Society's Enlightenment contest~


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I pity the person who doesn't know how to recognize the infinite amount of grey tones, that lie in between black and white.

The tones of grey are every bit of each smallest to largest aspect of our lives.
They are the things we experience & the possibilities that are left waiting to be chosen, even after we've made our choices.
They are the possibilities that are still waiting - chosen.
They are the things we choose to feel and what we could've felt, instead.

The things we ate and the things we could've eatern.



The greys are just as infinite as infinity itself.
Thank you for asking about they grey matter.

=)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Unfathomable...but intriguing.
A little like the middle ground betwixt life and death...and are there shades of grey between black and white? ...or just shades of our hopeless indecision?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Elephants & Coyotes,

During first read, you discover it is a theory way over your head. Upon reading a second time, you uncover some truth within the penning.

I saw the edge of time flip over into the middle of two days ago, WOW! Something I never expected to read anywhere, at anytime; in any circumstance (much less did I give thought thereof).

You just know there is an opposite of everything and time flipping back was a brilliant thing, for what would we do if the edge of time stayed in two days ago?

Awesome thought to ponder upon and even more real than imagined, sweet conspiracy theory.

Bravo Bravo~

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

I would like to invite you to place this one into Poetic Infusion Society's Enlightenment contest~


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fascinating thing to wonder about :) I love the scope of your topics :) And "the edge of time flip over", what a brilliant image! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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