Beatrice

Yeah, my name is Beatrice.

  There is a girl
  walking around
  the darkest side
  of the world.

  There is a boy who
  holds her hand as
  she cries
  every night.

  There is a baby
  who never got the
  chance to see,
  how perfect her
  life could be.

  There is a house
  with walls covered
  in blood, and broken
  glass that scares
  everyone.

  There is a girl walking
  on her graveyard.

  There is a girl and
  her name is Beatrice.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I like your name. One of most famous names of our time. The poem is hard and direct. A lot of hidden pain in your words. A sad ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[brenda]

this is great i love the suspense in it !!

[Raven Starhawk]

Without a doubt your descriptions are well done. You have a magical way in creating a classic.

[ImagineItAll]

Great poem in so many ways! Wonderful telling of a story.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Whew! This is like life through the eyes of the grim reaper.
Made my skin crawl.

[*Evelen*]

I really like this poem. It makes different things filled with pain flash before my eyes. Well done.

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

this is really good ^^