My cute little sister

My cute little sister

A Poem by Hibiki

thanks to be my cute little sister, lil sist ^^


My little cute sister

Always happy and smiling

If I were sad

She always makes me happy with her smile


But now..

She lays on bed

She can’t play or make me happy

Even she can’t smile brightly anymore

Leukemia takes away her life

She can’t do anything again


I can’t sleep

I can’t eat

I can’t think

What in my mind just her



  Why my little cute sister?

  Why must her?"

I said with tears and pain

I always pray for her 

To stay strong against leukemia


She gets weaker and weaker

Until one day she can’t move

She is even can’t talk easily

She wants me to be strong

And let her go


"Big bro

  I can’t always be by your side

  In this condition

  But remember

  I always inside your heart 

  If you feel sad or lonely

  Just call memories about me

  And I will cheer you up

  Like what I always do"

She smiles warmly


After she said that

Her condition turns to crisis

She is comma


Day by day

She doesn’t wake up

I always beside her bed 

Grab her hand and praying

Talking with her

Although she never answers me


My family just let her go

But exclude me

I can’t let my little cute sister go

She is everything in my life


One day

I dream what about her

I completely remember what she said

And then I decided

It's okay to let her go

So, I praying to her

Not to staying life

bBut just go pass through the life


The tomorrow day

She awakes

And she is completely fine

She fully gives me her warmest smile


Me with my family enjoy her last life

Until we see the sunset in hospital

The sun is go and she follows

The sun will come back next morning

But she doesn’t come back


I understand now

'When your heart is hurting

 It’s kinda like being blind

 You don't see the people that are there for you'

My family and my friends

And of course my little cute sister is always in me

Every day and every time


© 2014 Hibiki

Author's Note

This is my old poem. I found it when i checking my old papers
I keep the original of the writing
Still really newbie, eh?

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I am glad that you could make such a great poem for your sister, I bet she was smiling when she saw you write this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

thank you~~
It had a few mistakes but you can really ignore that with this story.
It made me want to cry. >:'(
Did this really happen?
Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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