A Beautiful...

A Beautiful...

A Poem by Eden Falls
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A Beautiful... by Eden Falls

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I rode a long way, longer than I thought it’d take, not just that day, but…for a good time. It all seemed blown to hell, then turned around. My best dream yet, with you.

 

I remember staying up late, just your voice in my head. After you left, I couldn't sleep much, thinking; wondering about something ‘now’, something real for change.

 

Until I slip back.

 

Running after the bus, into the sand, getting our feet wet, skipping rocks, and finding something rare; you let me live. I will relive this, for the rest of my life.

 

You beat my dreams.

© 2014 Eden Falls


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It is indeed beautiful, something so pure that is written from the heart and for everyone to perceive :) Where reality and dreams collide.. That's the place to stay.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Eden Falls

10 Years Ago

I've been searching my feelings lately. Because I 'think', that's just the place I intend to stay.
its totally us! and what happened and everything, all in that smart poetic voice of yours...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Eden Falls

10 Years Ago

Yep, yep it is. =)

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Added on February 17, 2014
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Tags: Real, Dream, Happy, Experience, Ocean, Sand, There, Outside, Inside, Reality, Dream-State, Passion, Best of Things, Enjoy, Life, Real True Life

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I am a dreamer, shut out from the world around me, trapped in dream and memory. Maintenance by CombatPlayer on Grooveshark Life is but a dream, fleeting and ever fallen astray; keep .. more..

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